Vampires
Ok, I will admit, I was first drawn to your song through your terrible spelling of 'Involuntary Sleep'. (Unvolentery Sleep, what the hell, didn't you go to school?)
But now I will listen to your music and tell you what I think, because that's why you posted it up right?
I see that to you 'goth' doesn't mean a lot of shouting and shredding of guitars, I like that you are going with goth the emotion rather than goth the silly teenage genre.
I also really like the fashion in which your ending trails off at the end.
The rest of the song is catchy, but very basic. My first suggestion would be that you start using whatever keyboard/synth/MIDI system you are running to create your own voices rather than running the rather dull pre-programmed ones.
But apart from that perfectly nice, you keep your recording quality high, something I completly fail to do.